Re: My layout project's website

• From: Jane Sullivan <jane@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
• Date: Tue, 6 Dec 2005 13:59:55 +0000

Hi,

I hope you all don't mind my posting about my website.

It's for the layout that I'm currently planning. The website can be found at:-

http://www.shaunsmodelrailway.net

The layout is going to be a British modern image layout in N gauge. It will be
loosely based on the town where I live with a bit of artistic license thrown in
so that I can get the operational variety that I want.

I intend to record every section of the project and put it online with
extensive photos of each stage too (when my camera *finally* gets delivered
that is - bl@@dy Dabs.com!!).

Currently it's at the concept and planning stage with the first draft track
plan having just been put online.

I've also put a forum on the site with visitors invited - and welcomed, even -
to make suggestions, criticise - constructively please!! ;) - and pick as many
holes in the project as they want. I want the best layout I can possibly build
and my shoulders are broad enough and I'm man enough to take on board any
criticism if it helps and improves the project.

OK.
Criticism No. 1: You have too many sentences starting with "And" on the
   home page.
Criticism No. 2: You have too many one-sentence paragraphs, where the
   following paragraph really should be part of the same paragraph.
Criticism No. 3: Your pages should have the page title ("Hobby History",
   "Concept" etc.) on them. It's not fair to expect your visitors to
   look at the URL to figure out where they are.

Anyway, I'll stop waffling on about it as you're all probably bored by now!

Not at all. Looking forward to seeing how things develop.

MRN

--
Jane
OO in the garden http://www.yddraiggoch.demon.co.uk/railway/railway.html

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