Re: Red Bull

On Oct 22, 2:19 pm, Gill.Smith....@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote:
On 21 Oct, 10:55, carl_bar...@xxxxxxxxxxx wrote:



On 20 okt, 10:58, silverthreads <silverthre...@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

I beieve you got that discipline from the gospel of Lazarus, where
Jesus beat up on the widow and slapped her around a little bit,
roughed her up so to speak. Is that where you got that discipline
from?

On Oct 19, 11:05 am, silverthreads <silverthre...@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:

I apologize for not being a cookie cutter writer, but I write
primarily from my own experience, and whereas I have dirt under my
fingernails that is probably older than most of you. I do not come to
this newsgroup for advice I come in pieces. Red Bull is a very
difficult song for me to write, because I have never lost Becky before
and I am having a very difficult time breathing, much less writing.
I do not know what you are a disciple of.

On Oct 17, 6:20 am, the14thdisciple <the14thdisci...@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:

On Oct 11, 11:56 am, silverthreads <silverthre...@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:

Red Bull
Words and Music by:
John McCullough
©2008
I'm down to one Red Bull a day
Restless nights won't go away
Endless nights turn into endless days
I just can't get get it right
When I finally hit the light
I can see you in my mind like it was daylight

Why, oh why did you have to go and die
I’m not ready, I'm not able
I'm not steady, I'm not stable
What in the hell am I supposed to do

This is all I have so far. No music yet.

mister Silverthreads, get yoarself a notepad.  i Doanet want to read
an ongoing draft of sombodys rhyming-practice, it means nothing
without an idea of rhythm or scan.  i'll Be impressed when you post
the final, finished track.

love From 14

I'm with 14 on this one, and you're making no friends here by throwing
vague attempts at insult in his direction.  14 is (one of the few)
working professionals in this group and I believe he's well liked.
You'd do well to listen to his advice rather than trying to get
attention for yourself with your pointless diatribes.

I also have this vague notion that he lives in Oz.

Is that so 14?

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