Re: New Song 'Out Of My Mind!' (unmastered)

Donna
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"Out Of My Mind"
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This is a good demo of a song with a lot of potential:   I can see
several ways of presenting it, i.e. A Cappella;  bass-drums-piano,
and/or soupy strings.....

I think I would go toward a mix of styles:  Keep the backing choir
and spacey setting you presently have and then crash in with drums
and bass for one verse - back to lilting voice, bring in a couple of
violins and go for a bit of a last-verse-crescendo.... something like
that....

Even the most softly-spoken and "floaty" tunes can respond well
to quite an energetic backing, but in general - it's best not to do the
same thing all the way through....

Good Luck - Keep writing!
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DJB
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"Donna" <donna.hunt1@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote in message
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> Hello Again!
>
> Please come and hear my latest song which was posted on Soundclick
> yesterday. It is another of my unmastered songs, which it is
> hoped/anticipated will be developed further. The lyric for 'Out Of My
> Mind' was written from sudden inspiration two mornings ago, and with
> the acoustic guitar, found a tune later the same morning..recorded
> roughly and yesterday finished tinkering with it.
>
> The imagery is of a sort of modern day 'Romeo/Juliet' scenario, where
> two soul mates have met, yet cannot be together.
>
> Your comments would be valued on my board..I will return the message
> and happily listen to yours. www.soundclick.com/donnaathome
>
> Thanks Everyone.
>
> With Respect and Warm Wishes.
>
> Donna
>



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