Re: Does this First Page Work?



elanders wrote:

I'm sure there's not a person alive (or dead) who can answer all your
questions in one page -- or would want to, for if he did, what would
be the point of the other 250 pages?

To tell a story.

It would be easy to explain "Romeo and Juliet" in a paragraph. Perhaps
a couple more pages would be needed to explain the social background.
This does not mean Shakespeare's play is useless.

And I understand your questions are straight from the workshop, I
just think they have no application here.

Why not?

Basically, the purpose of a first page is to hook the reader. I
assumed most here understood that.

ONE purpose of the opening is to hook the reader. A good opening also
serves other purposes.

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