Re: Slang attack



In article <48917e14_3@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>,
Graham Woodland <gray@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

The Duke: "[annoying mystical riddling about enemy activity in
the vicinity] ...Should I have known, should I have cared?"

"I should cocoa!" the Prince returned warmly. "[why they are in
another deep brown substance] ...How'd you care to be caught
between hammer and anvil?"

(Should you have known and cared? I should bloody say so!)

One further problem with this is that it is modern slang. To my ear, at
least, if fantasy has a pre-modern setting, modern slang sounds wrong.

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Author of _Harald_, a fantasy without magic.
Published by Baen, in bookstores now
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