Re: First Person
Mon, 04 Feb 2008 13:40:54 -0800, J.Pascal kirjoitti:
So... I like that. But I *can not* seem to transition to any sort of
description of the freaking beach. "Coarse sand pushed up between my
toes" just.... ugh.
The narrator does not sound to me like someone who would describe scenery
unless it annoyed her. But perhaps she will surprise me?
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Antti-Juhani Kaijanaho, Jyväskylä, Finland
WIP: Beethoven's First Murder (not AH)
Progress reports at
http://astraves.blogspot.com/
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