Re: crit: Bloodchanger opening

In message <g7herwzhgram$.3c0hsbdbp6x1$.dlg@xxxxxxxxxx>, Brian M. Scott <b.scott@xxxxxxxxxxx> writes
On Fri, 25 Aug 2006 22:57:44 -0700, Ben Crowell <crowell06
at lightSPAMandISmatterEVIL.com> wrote in
<news:a7mdnZ35Bd5If3LZnZ2dnUVZ_qydnZ2d@xxxxxxxxxxxx> in
rec.arts.sf.composition:

Dan Goodman wrote:

"My blood cures vampires," Allan Granger explained. "So
obviously I'm not afraid of them." He spoke a bit
louder than necessary; the more people at the party who
heard him, the better.

Lisbet Bathry gave him the kind of amused look some
adults give children. "Do you know how that happens?"
she asked.

"It's because I'm descended from Adam's first wife,"
Allen said. "The one who was banished from Eden because
she wouldn't listen to the Snake. And she didn't even
get her rib back."

It caught my interest, so that's good.

And mine.

Mine too. Hope you finish it, it sounds intriguing.

Helen
--
Helen, Gwynedd, Wales *** http://www.baradel.demon.co.uk
_Legacies of War_, a fantasy murder myster, now on the web at:
http://helenkenyon.livejournal.com/413.html
.

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