Re: CRIT: Yet Another Query Letter Critique, Take II
- From: Cyli <cylise@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Fri, 21 Apr 2006 06:18:55 -0500
On Thu, 20 Apr 2006 19:45:27 +0100, usenet@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
(Catja Pafort) wrote:
David Friedman wrote:
At ten, could he hit hard enough to cripple an adult with one blow? If
not, unless he can move backwards faster than his opponent can move
forwards, I think he's in serious trouble.
There are a couple of points on an adult's body that would be
momentarily debilitating - anywhere in the face, the jugular, the
crotch.
A ten year old is unlikely to win in a sustained fight, but he can get
in a lucky blow, and such a lucky blow is possible when the adult thinks
they're appending a helpless child.
Catja
Kneecap. A short straight on blow with the end of the staff, followed
by swinging the staff into whatever part of him she could hit could be
crippling.
--
r.bc: vixen
Speaker to squirrels, willow watcher, etc..
Often taunted by trout. Almost entirely harmless.
Really.
.
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