Re: CRIT: Second go on 2-page synopsis for Message Received.



In article <11v1b0ltbl4rreb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>, "Patricia C. Wrede" <pwrede6492@xxxxxxx> wrote:

(And if it were me in Rich's shoes, I'd be about ready to slug someone,
metaphorically speaking, because of all the solemn warnings that I was going
to need to cover stuff that I'd already covered *in the book.*

I've written a lot already (non-fiction), and written quite a bit with a
simlarly very strongly-opinioned co-author, so it's not troublesome at all. I
make some changes, reject others, then re-read it for pacing and 'story-ness',
make changes, move on.

And I think it's been a lot of help. I am grateful for your nibbled by ducks
comment though. I'll re-read the first one, and the last one, and make sure
it hasn't been 'de-zinged'.

The man must have the patience of a saint.)

Oh, god, stop it! You're killing me! This I gotta tell my wife. Better off,
I'll have her google it. She won't believe me if I just tell her.

Oh, and my son. I've just GOTTA tell my son. I think I'll wait tiill he's
home for spring break. I wanna see his reaction....

Rich Weyand
Working title "Message Received" complete
WIP: untitled sequel
.



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