Re: Warp and Weft of stories

Patricia C. Wrede wrote:

I'm fine with doing it here, or doing it in e-mail if nobody else here is interested in the blow-by-blow. I'm not talking about doing a crit, mind; I'm talking about taking your mostly-internal scene and doing a sort of running monolog of "here's what I'd change and why" as I go through and make the changes. 

I'd like to watch the process.

Bill

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Bill Swears

They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty nor safety.

Ben Franklin, 1755 "Historical Review of Pennsylvania"

To think that was once a right wing comment. In the land of Homeland Security it seems.. Suspiciously left-wing.
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