A Walk in the Woods
- From: Rik Roots <rik@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Sun, 20 Nov 2005 02:07:18 GMT
*A* *Walk* *in* *the* *Woods*
This miniature version of man
who has taken my storyline
and spliced it with chapters
from a woman I love takes me
for an adventure.
We are in danger: there may be
pirates in these woods, or wolves -
we beat through brambles and scuffle
dry leaves, their poisons mulching
the air we breathe. Toadstools
dust boots with spores, a trail
for bloodhounds to sneeze across
as they hunt the wrongly accused.
My foot breaks the ribs
of a squirrel, the space
where its eyes once rested
accusing me; the remains
of its guts dripping grubs
to the ground, seeking escape
from exposure. They piston
their flesh into the earth
eager to straitjacket
their juices, reorder
white flesh into flies.
And my lover's eyes
borrowed by my son
watch me grimace, shake
my boot: "Mum says
you want to be cremated,
like Nana." I nod
and smile, wordless.
"You smile funny," he says,
"when you step in ***!"
Sometimes I look at you,
my son, stunned by the way
you write your own book;
the way you rewrite mine
without even bothering
to ask.
Rik, knee deep.
--
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