I need help writing a short story

Hi

I wish to write a short story in the genre of horror
the story is based around the idea that everyone is controlled by an
evil life form
i have started a small section of the story, i welcome as much input
as possible can you plase add something to it ??


My life, is it really my life? Do you ask yourself the very same
question, those days you don't fell your self, could it be that you
are controlled by a force that is not human?
Can one be possessed by something that is of a higher being than a
human? Could you honestly say to yourself that you have never
considered this possability?

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