Re: can you check my English?


"Bob G" <mrbobjames@xxxxxxxxx> wrote in message news:cab88932-1437-4c6f-a01a-638e28851cd7@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


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Comments: You don't have to explain things ad infinitum, over and
over, with complete specificity and much redundancy, nor can you cover
any possible contingency in human behavior. People of moderate
intelligence can decipher your intention with a minimum of
instructions. Keep it SIMPLE!

Bob thank you very much! I substantially shortened the text with respect to your example. It looks much clearer now. Thanks!




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