Help my correct the grammar
- From: Duy Lam <duylamphuong@xxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Fri, 22 Feb 2008 19:25:47 -0800 (PST)
Hi all,
"A place where you do everything but no one complains of anything".
The idea I want to say in clause is that you have a room and you can
do anything, your parent can't blame you at all. Is this sentence
right ? Is the phrase "no one complains of anything" ok ?
"And when I was 20 year-old, the idea of owning private room had been
being my desire. I wish I could have private room within 1 year."
I don't know the tense is ok, and do I correct when use phrase "within
1 year" ?
"I usually use computer all day. In the morning, I get up, open pc,
and then leave it out untill to mid night."
In the clause "I usually use computer all day", I want to say that I
use computer all time in day. That is I open pc box at morning, suff
web, check email, view news and when I's tired, I go to sleep but
don't shutdown pc.
"The laptop is usefull in case I need a computer in somewhere else."
This clause mean that we need laptop when we must go somewhere and we
have a requirement to use portable pc.
"I need a good salary that our family didn't worry at finances, so
they will enjoy their living as much as they do."
I don't know the phrase "worry at finances" was clarified. I use
"worry at finances" to say that you needn't think about money, your
salary can provide for family fully.
Can you help me ?
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