Re: Since I've ..., I'll ...?

Marius Hancu wrote:
I wonder if the jump from present perfect tense to future tense in:
"Since I've checked into the hotel, I'll go to the convention center."
might be too much (for some of you).

I recognise these as the present perfect tense and the future tense as
you stated. To me the sentence is correct tense-wise and sounds 'okay',
however I'd improve it slightly to:

"Since I've now checked into the hotel I'll go to the convention
centre."

Alternatively (my preference): "Now that I've checked into the hotel
I'll go...."

'now' is to help with clarity and the flow of speech by indicating a
time focus. Without it 'Since' in the first clause can make you think
it is about to lead to some kind of defensive position eg 'Since I've
done that you can't kick me out'.

Extraneous points that haven't been asked but were noticed:

Note 1: I've removed the comma because it is unnessary particularly in
a short sentence. However it is a matter of style.

Note 2: I use 'centre' but this depends on regional difference and
preference.

Note 3: If it is a specific and name-specified convention centre with
the words 'Convention Centre" in it I'd capitalise. Again this is
subject to regional usage.

Solo Thesailor
http://sailingstoriesandtips.blogspot.com

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