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Is there any wrong sentence in here?
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TIM-1(Pattern processing machine) processes mold cores and stampers by
directly tapping down with a diamond tip. It is called TIM-1and has the
following advantages and disadvantages

Advantages)
1) With the super high-speed direct processing technology, the time
required in patterning has been drastically reduced. It requires
approximately 20 ~ 30 minutes to process 2-inch panel (32mm x 38mm).
Therefore, compared to etching, processing time is drastically reduced.
If there already is an injection facility within the company, the time
required from the processing with TIM-1, injection and checking of
optical properties to the next test is reduced down to approximately
100 minutes. Therefore, test process can be carried out without
limitation. As such, process of significantly high-quality samples can
be achieved in 24 hours from the commencement of pattern process.

2) The safe direct processing technology secured reproduction by 95% or
more."

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