Re: Proofread this, please
- From: Jim <grizzlyAIN'T@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Sat, 31 Dec 2005 12:03:20 -0500
On Sat, 31 Dec 2005 11:44:14 GMT, "Big Al, \(Iso Allo\)"
<allosaurus@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>I think, that this text contains a lot (and I mean it!) of errors:
>What animal Allosaur was? Single lifer or pack hunter? Carrion animal
>or is a fresh meat its favourite food?
>There is a many defaults, and this is only one too. Itself I think,
>that Allosaur hunts in packs with brand comrades a big sauropods
>from they select some sick or weak animal in their victim. In estimate
>so far, the archeologist was founded about 60-65 Allosaur fossils
>skeletons parts or full Allosaur skeletons. Best know is the Big Al, its
>bones was founded over 95% and there is dokument called "Ballad Of Big Al".
>Name Allosaur means "Different Lizard".
>
>NOTE: Because there is lot of text in the page, take a look
>at this link (safe): http://www.isoallo.net/english_pages/allosaurusgb.html
>Then tell me, is there any other errors?
I have proof-read the text. Did you have any other requests?
Blessed be, for sure...
.
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