Re: [maybe OT] Business letter


"Jim Lawton" <ucan@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> ha scritto nel messaggio
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> On Fri, 26 Aug 2005 09:57:19 GMT, "floria tosca" <floria tosca@xxxxxxxx>
> wrote:
>

>I will be grateful to anybody who wantS to correct this business letter and
^^^^
>give me any adviCe and I apologise to anybody who will be annoyed by
^^^^^
>this.

>About "delivery dates" I'm not sure to understand (NO CLUE) what it means:
>the dates
^^^^
>Purchasing Manager
^^^^^^^^^


First of all thank you very much.
I tried to correct what you underlined.
"who wantS" is clear
" any advice" and "purchasing" are problem of spelling, OK
"I am not sure to understand" I thought it was perfecly fine, where's the
problem with that? Should it be "I'm not sure uderstanding"? Did I guess?

Floria





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