Re: Ed goes insane! $20 More

On Sep 4, 2:49 pm, Derek <de...@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Ed,

Interesting idea for a song. For my tastes, the bass and rhythm
guitar were too far forward in the mix, and crowded out the vocal. In
a good mix, the vocal should be riding above, kind of like how all the
elements in a painting points you to whatever image the artist wants
to draw your attention to.

The other instruments should point to and compliment the vocal. I
didn't hear that in this example. It came across as laying down
various tracks that you thought might sound good together.

I really like the concept. I would have liked to have heard the
lyrics, I couldn't really. Hope this is what you were looking for,
and isn't too critical.

It was about a 2 hrs idea in the making - 1st metronome ( start will
be replace with a slot machine, dropping in quarters and pulling
handle - like "PinkFloyd -Money")
1 rythm to get it started, 1 slide for "insanity", bass pedals thrown
in for fullness
- so its very rough. Vocals were on the fly but your not missing to
much.

Came here today staying all night
play and play and play and play and play~~~~ alright~~
gimme $20 more

Playin all day and playin all night
play and play and play alright

Sayin the words I don't wanna hear No more !
You know how it goes - play and play and play

gimme $20 more I'm headed for the door
when I get in the car I won't ask for no more.
gimme $20 more

Play here all day staying all night
Im gonna play and play and play and play alright
gimme $20 more

It the T.I shuffle that the way it goes ( Fyi the casino is called
T.reasure I.sland)
Gimme $20 more I headed for the door now.

Gimme $20 more I wanna play it some more
gimme 20-20-20-20 moooore

Playin all day and playin all night
gonna play and play and play -alright !!


I'll fix it up ! Thank for the feedback -Ed


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