Re: Proof read this for me please.



On Oct 19, 8:56 pm, Sagetea <sagetea2...@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Sanity wrote:
I don t idolize people; not Washington, Jefferson, Paine, or myself as
we all err.   All of the above shouldn't t detract from the true
greatness of America s Framers, if any exists, and is only meant to
get people to see they were men, not gods.  I don t idolize people.

In your last paragraph you state I don't idolize people twice. You
might consider leaving off the last I don't idolize people and leave
the first. The first one states your position. The last one might be
construed as defensive.

It is defensive... <chuckle> Self defense is a hobby of mine. The
redundancy is also a plea for people to avoid idolatry and blind
trust. Often repetition is the only way to get through to some
people, that's just the way it is. <shrug>

Peace, Sanity
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